Future - 2050
3 am
In the closet
Petrified
Flashlight
Dark, sunken in, small eyes
To the kitchen to get water and chips
"I wish this tiger would leave."
He was stuck in his closet after the animals escaped the zoo. The animals were taking over the entire town, including his house. He had no where to hide, except for his closet which had no windows. It was so early in the morning, andstill dark outside, so no one else was there to help him. All he had was his flashlight and his thoughts. Petrified, shaking, and famished, he decided to leave his hideout and scrounge for food in the kitchen. He knew all the animals would have already taken all the food; all he wanted was some water and chips, something to snack on. As he opened the fridge, he saw the large, orange, striped monostrocity staring back at him. All he could think was, "I wish this tiger would leave." But before he could finish his thought, the tiger growled and lunged at him. As he covered his face with his arms in fear, he thought his life was over, but suddenly he felt wetness running down his leg. "Great," he said, they are going to finding my body covered in urine.
Great story! You can really tell how the character feels!
Maybe you'll luck out and the tiger will hide your urine soaked body where no one finds it.
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Creative WritingFuture - 2050
3 am
In the closet
Petrified
Flashlight
Dark, sunken in, small eyes
To the kitchen to get water and chips
"I wish this tiger would leave."
He was stuck in his closet after the animals escaped the zoo. The animals were taking over the entire town, including his house. He had no where to hide, except for his closet which had no windows. It was so early in the morning, andstill dark outside, so no one else was there to help him. All he had was his flashlight and his thoughts. Petrified, shaking, and famished, he decided to leave his hideout and scrounge for food in the kitchen. He knew all the animals would have already taken all the food; all he wanted was some water and chips, something to snack on. As he opened the fridge, he saw the large, orange, striped monostrocity staring back at him. All he could think was, "I wish this tiger would leave." But before he could finish his thought, the tiger growled and lunged at him. As he covered his face with his arms in fear, he thought his life was over, but suddenly he felt wetness running down his leg. "Great," he said, they are going to finding my body covered in urine.
Great story! You can really tell how the character feels!
Maybe you'll luck out and the tiger will hide your urine soaked body where no one finds it.