Brringggg.....The alarm went off. Wow, it's already Monday morning!! The weekend went by so fast!! I run throught the doors of my Anatomy and Phy. class, distraught over my outfit, my unfinished homework and the quiz that I am about to take. I feel exhausted already and the week is just dawning. I hold my pencil in hand, my mind is drifting in a hundred directions. Frustration sets in as I heard Mrs. Williams call my name. "Madison, you are needed in the front office." Wow, what could be wrong? Am I in trouble? Did I forget something?
I clung to my backpack, bringing it close to my chest as I started the secluded walk down the corrider to the front office. I could see Dr. Phillips face, frowning in disappointment before I even stepped foot beyond the front, glass windows. The secretary was typing frantically at her computer and did not even bother to glance up as she instructed me to have a seat by the door.
Excellent story. one that many students can relate to. I would be careful using abbreviations within the narrative. it could be confusing to others.
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Brringggg.....The alarm went off. Wow, it's already Monday morning!! The weekend went by so fast!! I run throught the doors of my Anatomy and Phy. class, distraught over my outfit, my unfinished homework and the quiz that I am about to take. I feel exhausted already and the week is just dawning. I hold my pencil in hand, my mind is drifting in a hundred directions. Frustration sets in as I heard Mrs. Williams call my name. "Madison, you are needed in the front office." Wow, what could be wrong? Am I in trouble? Did I forget something?
I clung to my backpack, bringing it close to my chest as I started the secluded walk down the corrider to the front office. I could see Dr. Phillips face, frowning in disappointment before I even stepped foot beyond the front, glass windows. The secretary was typing frantically at her computer and did not even bother to glance up as she instructed me to have a seat by the door.
Excellent story. one that many students can relate to. I would be careful using abbreviations within the narrative. it could be confusing to others.