Lilly is from modern day suburban city, and she is at the grocery store at 11:30 in the afternoon. She has a bag of forzev peas in her hand, and she is very excited because has been looking for them and couldn't not find them. Lilly is in the frozen section of the grocery store, and now needs to go to the produce section of the store. Lilly asks a man "Where can I find the grapes?"
Lily is a mom with three children, two boys and a girl. Her her husbands name is Marshall, and he is a lawyer for a national bank company. The boys names are Thomas and Emit they are twins and they are both on the soccer team together. There sister's name is Molly, and she is the baby of the family. Molly enjoyes being outside, but does not have a sport that is her own. They reason Lily needed to go to the grocery store, is because her twin boys Thomas and Emit were having a birthday party that weekend, and she needed to get stuff for the party. Thomas wanted to have a pirate party and Emit wanted to have a train party, so the party is all about a pirates who traveled only on trains. However, it was not going to be this easy because as cute as the twins were, they appeared to have a bit of a sneaky and devious side when Lily took her eyes off of them for even the slightest second. If only Marshall had time to spare to watch them then this trip to town would not be such a stressful risk, yet humorous, for Lily.
This is a great start to a story. I enjoyed your detail and descriptions of the characters in this story. Continue with your story and kept up the details. I will look forward to see what happens to the characters.
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This is a great start to a story. I enjoyed your detail and descriptions of the characters in this story. Continue with your story and kept up the details. I will look forward to see what happens to the characters.