Well, it is the time to see her favorite band. The year is 1972 and the concert venue is crowded and people are anxious and excited to see Led Zeppelin. It is around 8:00 pm and the band has already been playing for about 30 minutes. There are many different types of people there; who have been looking forward to seeing this concert for a while. This fun loving girl is feeling so many emotions right now that she cannot believe she is finally seeing these four amazing musicians. She is dancing and holding her drink and singing every song between sips. After a few hours of jamming out to the band she eventually has to go home. As she is leaving she says to herself, "Led Zeppelin was so amazin!" She cannot wait to get home and tell her friends. What started out as the most amazing night of her life quickly took a turn in the opposite direction. In the blink of an eye, she ran head on into an oncoming vehicle.
I like the beginning of the story. I can picture myself at this point in time (70's) by your descriptive words.
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Creative Writingthe seventies
night time around 8:00 pm
at a concert
excited and happy
holding a drink
smiling big about to take a sip
going home because the concert is over
Led Zeppelin was so amazing
Well, it is the time to see her favorite band. The year is 1972 and the concert venue is crowded and people are anxious and excited to see Led Zeppelin. It is around 8:00 pm and the band has already been playing for about 30 minutes. There are many different types of people there; who have been looking forward to seeing this concert for a while. This fun loving girl is feeling so many emotions right now that she cannot believe she is finally seeing these four amazing musicians. She is dancing and holding her drink and singing every song between sips. After a few hours of jamming out to the band she eventually has to go home. As she is leaving she says to herself, "Led Zeppelin was so amazin!" She cannot wait to get home and tell her friends. What started out as the most amazing night of her life quickly took a turn in the opposite direction. In the blink of an eye, she ran head on into an oncoming vehicle.
I like the beginning of the story. I can picture myself at this point in time (70's) by your descriptive words.